55 word short story: second revision

BATTLE AMONG MEN.

The day started out normal. The boys in uniforms were looked upon as heroes. These were children going out to fight a man's battle. They would fight as a team until the enemy retreated, defeated. After all the blood, sweat, and tears; two hours past seven... homecoming score 36-0


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